Touching poem. We can feel your emotions.
You really translated your feelings to words, and it hit the spot. Your hurt shines through it. It's almost like you've written about one of those fallen starlets you've documented. Or the lyrics to the next big song.P.S.- that molten barbie made me shudder so bad, I dreaded seeing the next image. Hooh!
There are definitely people like this. Awesome Jen!http://www.averysweetblog.com/
I love you, Jenny! This is too, too perfect. You have an amazing way with words! :)
You are so feakin creative, darling!Putting these words in the form of a poem adds a bit of wry humor to something painful. Total genius.Have a spectacular weekend :)xoxox,CC
Really well written poem. It flows beautifully and with a deep message.Oh to Be a Muse Shop Layered Muse
oh dear - sounds like you may not like her so much now - powerful tho Jen :)
Women and girls are so weird, aren't we? We're so deep and mysterious...and sometimes fake. Your poem reminds me of two people who used to be my BFFS.Have you heard of this? http://www.pw.org/grants?sort=asc&order=field_deadline_value&apage=*&perpage=*My creative writing teacher told us about the site. You should submit some of your work!xo Azu
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